this is not how it goes, and its..,
"the humans are gone" not dead, and the song sound very different in the official ver and better.
The animation was below average too, and this is one of the most unoriginal flashs ive ever seen, il give you a generous 3/10 atleast, for the effort.
Nope, you are wrong, it's the humans are dead. Actually, if you are talking about the name of the song, it's "robots".
This song was done by the same people who did the longer one, so this IS an "original version".
And even though I agree it was way below average, I don't think there was neccessary anything else to the animation, it may not be a masterpiece, but it didn't need any fancy stuff.
That said, I'm going to work only on original stuff from now on, as my objective with this (practice) was achieved.
way to short!
make fewer, but longer episodes... i give a 4 for the basic effort and brilliance
way to short, make longer episodes.
Make less episodes, but instead each episode longer...
Oh god, YES! I loved the first one, now you release a second one? This is like a wish coming true, i love YOU!!!!
DID YOU SEE THAT FUCKING NUKE??? IT GAVE YOU THE FINGER!! 10/10 5/4'
SHOULD have been a great game!
but you failed extreme on the difficulty and gameplay!
I CAN ZES TEH SOULZ
I RATEZ SLIME/FROG
I don't see any good rhythm in here at all, the sounds feel random by my opinion. Very repetitive.
Easy classical, i like it.
...Maybe just a bit too "easy" for my taste tough.
Indeed it is too easy. 15 minutes of production. Totally on the fly work.
Thanks for the honesty sir. :3
Has a very nice cloth/handmade feel to it, if that's what you were going for, then great job! You could however add some sort of constant shading with a main lightsource. Right now it is kind of flat with the exception of the detailed texturing. What it is missing is the overall lightning creating the illusion of it actually being a real object.
What I mean is this http://i1-linux.softpedia-static.com/screenshots/American-Flag-Theme_1.jpg - The best example I could find with a quick google search. If you pay attention to the lighting on that flag, you see it is brighter at center-right(the artist chose the center-right as the source/origin of light.). This adds another whole layer of depth and beauty to the picture. Try imagining it without the lightning, if you can. You should start to understand why that last touch is of such importance.
To emulate such lightning effects, you could either use manual work, manual editing(Dodge/burn tool in ps for an example), or for ease and quick quality results, the filter->render->lightning effects tool in PS. Mixing and experimenting with different ways is the best way to learn in the long run, you often have to mix different methods to achieve the effects you want at higher level editing.
Layer masks are also a great tool for these things, though it might be best to leave that for later when you understand the system better to begin with :).
Thank you for the good review, your feedback is well taken.
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